Great ambience on this one is great. The mixing is also good, there is a good separation i the instruments, the lead may be a bit loud.
Great ambience on this one is great. The mixing is also good, there is a good separation i the instruments, the lead may be a bit loud.
I think the hats are a bit loud, otherwise great job.
appreciate it. Yea, i'm just a loud hat kind of guy. But your right, now that someone mentioned it there. Thanks!
This is extremely unique and I love that you tried a lot of different things with this track to make it fun to listen to. You also created a great atmosphere. One thing that needs work is the mix, the drums felt kind of buried in a couple spots or like they were really competing with something, the lead could use a bit more grit, maybe use an overdrive plug-in on it? But overall I really liked it, some great ideas in here.
Hey OmegaP,
thanks for your advice! I really appreciate it when people listen to my music and give such constructive feedback! I'll definitely adjust the lead (since it really sounds mashed up, lot of undefined middle frequencies that i didn't even notice in the first place) and the drums!
Cheers!
Powerful as always, I really love the deep sub it is just perfect!
I appreciate the encouragement. Did it provide a powerful sleep? I tend to write stuff like this to help my thoughts drift quite a bit. Never intended this to be listened to directly, nor do I expect people to be very productive in their work while listening to it.
The musical ideas in this are very good the melody and the harmony work together really well. I liked 1:01 where it kind of had that breakdown with a cool chord progression. A couple of technicals that I think could be improved. 1) the main lead was way to loud at some points it was almost hard to listen to the music because that is all I could hear 2) The drums were muddy and did not sit in the mix as good as they could have, with that said for some reason the breakdown at 1:00 the kick really came through the mix, I don't know if you used a different sample or what, but I would use that kick for the whole song. The snare need to snap more and it was very burried so I would bring that up a bit, esp for drum and bass you need a snappy snare. I like all of the tom rolls in the begging and the end but to make them sit in the mix better I would pan them and also bring them up along with the snare. I think that the claps in the background were great! 3)Lastly some of the transitions in the song were a little weird for example around :37 the lead just dropped out and it made the song feel disjointed. However your use of pads was very could!
Ok, so keep up the good work and I wish you the best of luck :) Also, if you have any question about what I said feel free to PM me.
Thanks for the feedback! It was all very helpful! I actually used only one kick sample, and was a little baffled myself as to why it didn't have as much presence at times. I was going for a little bit of a cinematic feel, sort of...? So, I was trying hard not to let the drums dominate the song. I need to work on the balance though, yeah.
Thanks again!
You have some very strong melodies and the instruments blend really nicely, around 1:38 (I think) the strings just drop out and it felt slightly awkward. But very pleasant!
This is a really awesome piece! I think that the melody and the rhythm are spot on; reminds me of pirates of the caribbean or the assassin's creed Black Flag. My favorite part is the string runs; they just sound phenomenal and blend very well with the rhythm section. I don't hand out five stars very often but I think that this deserves it!
Thank you tremendously! It means a lot!
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